Find Out Why Your Meta Ads Aren't Selling, and What to Fix First
A 90-minute, 1-on-1 review of your message, your ads (live in your Ads Manager), your landing page and your offer. You leave knowing what to fix first, with a written Action Plan like the one on this page.
Book your sessionUS$250 · 90 minutes on Zoom · Action Plan and recording included
Rated 5 stars by 200+ Meta advertisers on Fiverr and Trustpilot
Rewrite Ad 2's hook around her problem, not the serum.Ad 2 scored 3 out of 7
Make the page headline repeat the ad's promise, word for word.Landing page failed the 5-second test
Say "$12 off", not "15% off".Offer: the deal reads smaller than it is
KeepAd 1, the before-and-after video. It scored 6 out of 7.
Page 1 of 6Glow Skincare is a fictional example
Every session ends with a plan like this one, written for your business. Here is what's inside it, using a fictional skincare brand as the example.
Action Plan · Glow SkincareExample
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Your message
Most ads talk about the business: the product, the ingredients, the brand. Customers scroll past because they can't see themselves in the story.
We start here, before any settings. Using the Storytelling Ad Framework, we find the problem your customer feels and the result they want, and turn it into a message you can use in every ad, on your page and in your offer.
"He could analize my problem in few minutes and gave an action plan."
adityadutta915 · India · Fiverr
Ad 2 headline, marked upFix
Introducing our new Vitamin C Serum, made with 20% pure ascorbic acid
Skin looking dull by 3pm? Get your morning glow back.
Lead with what she feels, then what she gets. The ingredients can come later.
Your one-linerBusy women with tired, dull skin get a glow that lasts all day, in one step.
Angle to test"The 3pm mirror check": the moment she notices.
Angle to test"One step, not ten": for the woman with no time.
Page 2 of 6Brand Story, one-liner and 3 ad angles
Action Plan · Glow SkincareExample
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Your ads, live in Ads Manager
You share your screen and we open your Meta Ads Manager together. Every ad is scored on 7 checks and gets a clear verdict: keep it, fix it or pause it, with the exact change to make.
You see what's getting attention, what isn't, and why, inside your own account.
"I've yet to talk to someone who can jump into an account, look at the historicals, and diagnose the issues so quickly."
saenhiggins · United States · Fiverr
Ad scorecard, 7 checks per ad
Ad
Stops the thumb
What's in it for me
Names the problem
Real proof
Clear action and price
Reason to act now
Right click
Score
Verdict
Ad 1 · Before-and-after video
6/7
Keep
Ad 2 · "Introducing our new serum"
3/7
Fix
Ad 3 · Brand story carousel
1/7
Pause
Ad 1 · Before-and-after videoKeep · 6/7
Misses: a reason to act now.
Ad 2 · "Introducing our new serum"Fix · 3/7
Misses: what's in it for her, her problem, proof, a reason to act now.
Ad 3 · Brand story carouselPause · 1/7
Only shows proof. Nothing else lands.
Page 3 of 6A score and verdict for every ad
Action Plan · Glow SkincareExample
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Your landing page
When the page says something different from the ad, even the people who click don't buy. We run the 5-second test and 8 more checks, and mark where people lose interest.
You get practical tweaks you can make yourself. No rebuild needed.
"He pointed out some conversion killers in my ads and gave a advice on how to restructure my campaign to increase my ROAS…"
leafzde · Germany · Fiverr
Landing page check, 9 points3 to fix
The 5-second testHeadline says "Welcome to Glow". Say what she gets.
Talks about the customer, not "we"
Matches the adThe ad promises a morning glow. The page never says it.
Names the problem she feels
Proof near the topReviews start four scrolls down on a phone.
One clear button, repeated
Price and offer are easy to find
Easy to read and tap on a phone
No friction at checkout
Page 4 of 6Practical tweaks, ranked
Action Plan · Glow SkincareExample
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Your offer
A strong ad can't sell an offer that's hard to say yes to. We read your offer the way your customer does, and sharpen what's unclear.
"Well worth the money spent 10 times over."
kats26 · Australia · Fiverr
Can someone say what they get, in one sentence?
Does the deal sound as big as it is?
Is there a real reason to buy today?
What takes away the risk of buying?
Is there a simple way to raise the order value?
After costs, is there room to pay for ads?
15% off$120 off
The same discount, said the customer's way
A high-ticket brand changed "15% off" to "$120 off". Click-through rate, add-to-carts and ROAS all improved. To their customers, $120 felt substantial. 15% felt small.
0.41%0.76%
Revenue up 18%, with no extra spend
A client reworked their ad creative without raising their budget. Click-through rate nearly doubled, and revenue grew 18%.
These two are real client results, not part of the example. Results vary by business.
Page 5 of 6Offer review
Action Plan · Glow SkincareExample
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Your next 30 days
Before the call ends, we rank the fixes together on screen, so you leave already knowing what to do first. Your written plan follows within 48 hours, with a week-by-week order to work through.
"…the conversation is recorded, and you can go through all this valuable information again at any time - I think that's amazing!"
andre_kril · Germany · Fiverr
Week 1Rewrite Ad 2 with the new hook. Pause Ad 3.
Week 2Match the page headline to the ad. Move reviews to the top.
Week 3Test "$12 off" against "15% off".
Week 4Read the results. Keep the winner, cut the rest.
Your Action Plan (PDF) within 48 hoursThe full session recording
Jason Gan has run Meta ads since 2010, for his own businesses and for agency clients. For years, writing the ads was the hardest part of the job.
Going back through his old ads, he noticed a pattern. Almost every one was about him: what he offered, why he was the right choice. Once he put the customer at the centre of the story, every ad he wrote changed.
He turned that approach into the Storytelling Ad Framework, the same framework used in your session. You work with Jason directly, from booking to your Action Plan.
Since 2010Running Meta ads
6,000+Advertisers coached across 50+ countries
1,000+Ad accounts personally audited
Meta CertifiedProfessional and Badged Meta Business Partner
His insights were spot-on, and after just one session, I started seeing results.
Wu Johnathan · Australia · Trustpilot
"I've chatted with other people before but Jason came to the meeting prepared and had a game plan in mind. He read all the materials I sent to him beforehand which I was pleased with."
kats26 · Australia · Fiverr
"He solved an issue that I've been having for two years in under 30 minutes!"
kevinlanza · United States · Fiverr
"What's cool is that Jason doesn't push you to buy courses or join group trainings like other coaches do."
Wu Johnathan · Australia · Trustpilot
"I am new to paid ads so I was very unsure of my work but after my session with Jason I'm left feeling more confident and hopeful for the future."
alisa_lam · Australia · Fiverr
"We learned more about optimizing our ad performance in this session than we ever did from the Meta Pro team through their phone calls."
hydro1mktg · Malaysia · Fiverr
Got what i wanted, a clear plan to execute!
Mr Overpaid · Netherlands · Trustpilot
Is this session right for you?
It's a strong fit if you:
Run Meta ads that get attention but not enough sales
Aren't sure whether the problem is the ad, the page or the offer
Are about to launch your first Meta ads and want to start with the right message
Want an expert's eyes on everything, without signing up for a monthly program
It's not for you if you:
Want someone to make or run your ads for you
Are looking for guaranteed results
Action Plan · Your businessStarts here
Book your session
$250USD · one 90-minute session
Pick a time and payBy card or PayPal, in one step.
Reply to one short emailSend your ads, landing page and offer, so we start with substance.
Meet Jason for 90 minutesHave your Ads Manager open. Your Action Plan and recording follow within 48 hours.
Need to move your session? Reschedule up to 48 hours before. Sessions are non-refundable.
Yes. We'll build your message before you spend anything, and review the ads you're planning to run.
I've been running ads for a while. What will I get out of it?
A second set of expert eyes on your message, ads, landing page and offer, and a ranked list of what to fix first. Most experienced advertisers find their ads are written from the business's point of view, not the customer's.
Will you write the ads for me?
No. You get specific changes and direction for each ad, so you can keep writing effective ads after the session.
What do I need to prepare?
After you book, you'll get one short email asking for your current ads, landing page and offer. Send what you have, and we'll cover the rest live. On the call, have your Meta Ads Manager open so we can go through it together.
Is the session recorded?
Yes. You'll receive the full recording along with your Action Plan.
How do I pay?
You pay when you book, by card or PayPal.
Can I reschedule?
Yes, up to 48 hours before your session. Changes within 48 hours aren't possible, and sessions are non-refundable.
What happens after the session?
You'll have a clear plan to act on. If you'd like ongoing support as you make the changes and read the results, you can continue with monthly coaching. There's no obligation.
Do you guarantee results?
No one can honestly guarantee ad results. What you get is a proven framework, expert feedback and a clear plan.
Make your customer the hero of your ads
In 90 minutes, go from guessing what's wrong to knowing what to fix first, with a written plan to follow.
About the Ads That Sell Assessment. The Ads That Sell Assessment is a 90-minute, 1-on-1 Meta ads review with Jason Gan, a Meta ads strategist who has run campaigns since 2010. It's designed for e-commerce and small business owners whose Meta (Facebook and Instagram) ads aren't converting, and for beginners preparing to launch. Using the Storytelling Ad Framework, we review your ad message, copy and creative live in your Ads Manager, check your landing page and offer, and give you a written action plan with what to fix first.